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Sunday, 15 May 2016

Mountain biking

Mountain biking
Sharp turns make me break frantically. 
I speed through the forest, as fast as my little legs can take me, so I can catch up with the person in front of me.
Biking on the bumpy ground jolts me around.
A strong wind skims past my face.
Steep hills await my approach.
Splashing through the stream chills my feet. I feel alive!

3 comments:

  1. Your writing is very descriptive I felt like I was there when I read your writing it seems like you have explained very well what it was like a picture suddenly appeared in my mind I loved reading your moutaining biking poam because I wasn't on camp when you went mountain biking.

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  2. Liam, I really like the way you write your sentences, in my mind they come to life.
    “Sharp turns make me break frantically”,The way you say that, makes a image in my mind making you frantically break on sharp turns on your bike.

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  3. This is very good Liam the sentence sharp turns make me break frequently reminds me of when I go biking with my dad

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